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22 September 2010 @ 07:26 am
Lines, by PFL  
Title: Lines
Author name: PFL
Artist name: Maerrie/hermine
Archive to Pros Lib: Yes
Genre: Slash
Characters/Pairing: Bodie/Doyle
Word count: 17,606
Warnings: None needed

Summary: Doyle wakes up in a warehouse to find himself injured, suffering from amnesia, and apparently involved in a bombing plot with a man named Foster. He soon meets Williams--a tall, dark, beautiful (and engagingly modest) mercenary arms dealer. Doyle tries to find out who he is, what's going on, and why he instinctively trusts Williams, even though he clearly shouldn’t.

Notes: Thank you to elizabethoshea, O Anonymous One, and dorinda for hand-holding, encouragement, beta-work, formatting...everything, really! Thank you to my wonderful, inspiring, incredibly patient artist Maerrie/hermine. (You all are in for a treat!) Thank you to our fabulous (and also incredibly patient) mods callistosh65 and przed. And, finally, a special thank you to my entire F'list (and Circle) for encouragement duty above and beyond. *g*

This has no real relation to the story, but I was repeatedly listening to Snow Patrol's "Chasing Cars" during crucial pondering time with this story. So for me, at least, the story is infused with that song. (In Bodie's perspective. *g*)

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firlefanzine: Bodie+Doyle_Mixedfirlefanzine on September 23rd, 2010 09:22 am (UTC)
I love the scenario. One of them suffering from amnesia. But you've added some new aspects.
Is Bodie able to gain the trust of Doyle? And would Doyle do something that is absolutely against his nature?
You solved that very nicely! :-)

And fortunately Ray gets his memories back!(- because losing it for ever, would be some kind of dying...)
And fortunately Ray could convince Bodie that the kiss was a beginning of something wonderful, worth stepping over those lines...! ;-)

Yes - a satisfying read!
Thank you very much!
msmoatmsmoat on September 23rd, 2010 04:07 pm (UTC)
You're welcome! Thank you for commenting. *g*

I'm with you in that permanent change, like not getting his memory back, would be less satisfying for me. But I've also got a thing about making the story realistic, at least in Pros. So...that meant the amnesia had to be of short duration, and part of the confusion from a serious concussion. I'm glad to hear that it worked so well for you!