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22 September 2010 @ 07:26 am
Lines, by PFL  
Title: Lines
Author name: PFL
Artist name: Maerrie/hermine
Archive to Pros Lib: Yes
Genre: Slash
Characters/Pairing: Bodie/Doyle
Word count: 17,606
Warnings: None needed

Summary: Doyle wakes up in a warehouse to find himself injured, suffering from amnesia, and apparently involved in a bombing plot with a man named Foster. He soon meets Williams--a tall, dark, beautiful (and engagingly modest) mercenary arms dealer. Doyle tries to find out who he is, what's going on, and why he instinctively trusts Williams, even though he clearly shouldn’t.

Notes: Thank you to elizabethoshea, O Anonymous One, and dorinda for hand-holding, encouragement, beta-work, formatting...everything, really! Thank you to my wonderful, inspiring, incredibly patient artist Maerrie/hermine. (You all are in for a treat!) Thank you to our fabulous (and also incredibly patient) mods callistosh65 and przed. And, finally, a special thank you to my entire F'list (and Circle) for encouragement duty above and beyond. *g*

This has no real relation to the story, but I was repeatedly listening to Snow Patrol's "Chasing Cars" during crucial pondering time with this story. So for me, at least, the story is infused with that song. (In Bodie's perspective. *g*)

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sc_fossil: Pros Partners by Katsc_fossil on September 23rd, 2010 07:15 pm (UTC)
What a wonderful tale. I really like how you showed us everything through "Duncan's" then Doyle's eyes. The first part when Duncan had a lot of interaction with "Williams" I could tell how much Duncan trusted Williams even through the haze of his amnesia. then when they had to set the bombs and Doyle knew something was wrong but couldn't remember and tried to find help. Man, I was sure bad things were on the horizon. You didn't let me down with the second part as Doyle struggles to remember and then "the kiss" looms large in his thoughts. Well done! Thank you, B!
msmoatmsmoat on September 23rd, 2010 11:20 pm (UTC)
Thank you! Years and years go I thought of the opening of this--Doyle waking up with amnesia, confused and lost, and then he meets tall, dark, and beautiful. *g* I always wanted to tell the story through Doyle's eyes, with the audience knowing more than he does. I'm glad I finally had the opportunity to figure out the story and write it.

I'm very glad you enjoyed it!