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22 September 2010 @ 07:26 am
Lines, by PFL  
Title: Lines
Author name: PFL
Artist name: Maerrie/hermine
Archive to Pros Lib: Yes
Genre: Slash
Characters/Pairing: Bodie/Doyle
Word count: 17,606
Warnings: None needed

Summary: Doyle wakes up in a warehouse to find himself injured, suffering from amnesia, and apparently involved in a bombing plot with a man named Foster. He soon meets Williams--a tall, dark, beautiful (and engagingly modest) mercenary arms dealer. Doyle tries to find out who he is, what's going on, and why he instinctively trusts Williams, even though he clearly shouldn’t.

Notes: Thank you to elizabethoshea, O Anonymous One, and dorinda for hand-holding, encouragement, beta-work, formatting...everything, really! Thank you to my wonderful, inspiring, incredibly patient artist Maerrie/hermine. (You all are in for a treat!) Thank you to our fabulous (and also incredibly patient) mods callistosh65 and przed. And, finally, a special thank you to my entire F'list (and Circle) for encouragement duty above and beyond. *g*

This has no real relation to the story, but I was repeatedly listening to Snow Patrol's "Chasing Cars" during crucial pondering time with this story. So for me, at least, the story is infused with that song. (In Bodie's perspective. *g*)

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Gilda Elise: Pros-Soul Matesgilda_elise on October 9th, 2010 10:28 pm (UTC)
God, I absolutely loved this! I loved how Ray, even when not knowing who he was felt his connection to Bodie. I loved how Bodie would do anything to protect Doyle, even if it meant his own happiness. But especially I loved how you managed to show both their vulnerabilities and their strengths at the same time.

And I loved this:

Doyle felt it in the way his body relaxed so comfortably against Bodie’s. It was like coming home after a long op and shutting the door on the outside world.
msmoatmsmoat on October 10th, 2010 02:12 am (UTC)
Hey there! Well, this was a very nice comment to read, in the middle of a busy and tiring day. Yay! I'm so pleased you enjoyed this. I love amnesia stories, because of the way relationships might shift, and truths might be revealed because of new perspectives. Bodie and Doyle both learned something about themselves and each other through the amnesia. And the reader gets to enjoy knowing just why it is that Doyle feels drawn to Bodie, and why Bodie is acting as it is. Anyway, thank you for letting me see the story a bit through your eyes--it makes me very happy. *g*