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29 September 2010 @ 08:46 am
Acts of Choosing by KWS  
Title: Acts of Choosing
Author: kiwisue
Artist: gblvr
Archive to Pros Lib: Yes
Genre: Slash
Characters/Pairing: Bodie/Doyle
Word count: 24,945
Warnings: Contains minor, non-explicit mention of child prostitution.


Summary: It’s spring 1979 and union leader Tom Findlay is fighting a losing battle against the authorities and owners who want to shut down the last of the upriver docks. Meanwhile, Bodie and Doyle are investigating a murder, one in which Findlay (an old acquaintance of Doyle’s) is the chief suspect. The Lads discover that there’s more going on beneath the muddy waters of the Thames than meets the eye.

Notes: :byslantedlight battled incidents and accidents and made this a much better story than it was to begin with. My secret beta did a pinch hit when I needed it. All remaining errors are my own!
Also thanks are due to the terrific comm mods for running this challenge *hugs*.


Link to Fic: Fic Master Post
Link to Art: Art Master Post
Link to E-reader files: Later!

(I am late, sleep deprived & posting on a pub internet connection that does odd things from time to time - fingers crossed this works!)
 
 
 
raven_rsraven_rs on October 2nd, 2010 07:00 pm (UTC)
I have to confess, I'm thoroughly confused. At the end of part 2, Cowley is sending them to Macklin. Then Part 3 starts with Doyle cooking and the two writing a report, and goes on to talk about Doyle's relationship with Claire. Is there a part missing?
kiwisue: Thoughtful by snarkyllamakiwisue on October 9th, 2010 07:28 am (UTC)
Sorry for the delay, I've been 'on the road'.

The third part starts at the end of 'Mixed Doubles'. Perhaps putting the part break between the reference to Macklin and the scene with Coyle by the lake broke the continuity & caused the confusion? I might tweak that bit a little though, just to make sure it's clear - thanks for the comment.
raven_rsraven_rs on October 11th, 2010 03:40 pm (UTC)
Ahhh! All becomes clear! Thanks